Tent

Someone on a forum I visit requested a picture of a tent no larger than 24x32x256, with palette index 0 being treated as transparent. This was only a 5 minute attempt, so I'm surprised how easy I found it.

(for the record, the guy's response was that its too small, and is the wrong type of tent, and is the wrong perspective. *shrug* Can I get some c&c please on the actual drawing?)

For the record, the tent is a Vango Summit 300, I think. It doesn't look right, though, because I couldn't get the full length of the tent into 24 pixels even at such a tiny scale. I figured a more dome-like tent would be better than a long but unrecognisable half-cylindrical one.